zedd56's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alphabet!]

ZOMFG MAJOREZ MIZTAKE.

this 3 would have been a 7 if you had fixed a few things

like the disabled right click that has already been mentioned would be rly halpful.

Also, you REALLY should have made it so you lose points if you hit letters out of order. That way you cant just mash. Oh well, better luck next time

[K-FED: Dancing with Fire]

damn i love tom.

Lol, you wanna know what the first thing that popped into my mind when i saw this was?

Old-ass snk games.
Hahahaha, tom loves his classics :P

I swear, the correct combination of sound effects, graphics, and layout basically re-creates neo-geo bowling, king of fighters and freaking metal slug.

This was unbelievably well done, keep it up :D

[Wonderful Gunaiming tut]

Definately Needs some work.. but a good start

I think this tutorial was a bit brief, and lacking.
It was missing a few things...
i especially didn't like the fact that i was viewing a tut where the crosshair wasn't even centered to the mouse... it gave the feeling that you didn't know what you were doing.

Also, when i read 'tutorial' i REALLY didn't expect to find a copy-and-paste code inside. And you used such simple code, the part where you get the crosshair to move/animate isn't what people want to learn. That part is easy. If you have experience in these games, you should have taught on how to make the crosshair interact with moving targets. Also your demonstration crosshairs were kinda buggy... like the fact that the bullet should leave the crosshair after you shoot, not follow the crosshair 'till it goes away.

I KNOW you can do better... but this looks like it was done in a matter of minutes. I also expected it to be a bit longer than a few frames as well...

Keep it up, good tutorials are revered by all, but when it comes down to learning flash, an ok~ tutorial usually doesn't cut it. Because here, on Newgrounds, nobody likes to see an ok~ flash. Newgrounders make FUKN AWESOEM flash :D

Hope i was help. And please remember; i'm not trying to flame you, man. I'm just another Newgrounder trying to pass along some advice. So keep up the work, i hope you succeed in the flash world :)

[Agnry Faic 2]

T3h AwesOmEzor?!

I AER TEH AGNRY FAIC
I AER EAT TEH NO&BS IN TEH SKY
RRARRARRAGHHHRAHRHHGHHHHHARHAHRRHGHHH

fuckin' awesome game XD
im gonna go play it again now...

[The Unfair Platformer]

.........

ZOMFG
i wanna punch my computer now
*punch*

i just dont have the attention span for this...

[FPA: World 2]

OMFGHOLYSHITZORZINTEHPANTS

The platformer can only be second to Mario or Sonic. But when it comes to flash? NO FUCKING WAY. this is just too good to be true. The animation and physics are beyond perfect. I mean, you even had the hair flowing to every last detail. This is a game of genious. I think you could continue this to worlds 3, 4, 5... until you get your own collection and then eventually... collaborate them. IF you want to.
Im gonna go play ep. 1!!!!!1!!!1!!1!111

BTW KEEP UP THE GUD WORK. KEEP DOING THIZ SHIT AN MAKE A NAME FOR YORSELF

[Mega Button]

HAHA LOL IDEA DOOD

aw man thats fucking AWESOME

just 1 flaw: .... theres like a million ways to cheat... nobody is ACTUALLY gonna CLICK their MOUSE. but still funny to see how the scores are already so fucking high...... i'd like to see somebody beat them scores with their MOUSE and, well, ya know, WITHOUT MACROS.

(sorry, i LIKE that CAPS LOCK key.)

N5 responds:

Quiet! Don't tell everyone they can make something like that. I was going to make the button move around, but then its not as pointless. no real cheaters with a score of 9999999999+ yet.

[Buttons and actions tut.]

It was ok

Like the other guy says, it WILL teach a COMPLETE AND TOTAL beginner how to make an extremely simple button with an extremely simple action. You explained it well enough that in the sense that this is a tutorial, it WORKS. Although, you decided not to go that extra step and actually make it a bit decent. If you make your tutorials lazily and without any effort / detail, nobody would actually finish the tutorial, with the thought in mind that "with that type of presentation, i can't possibly learn anything from this guy." So next time, not only should you educate, but set a good example for yourself, by adding more color, a PRELOADER (people should not have to wait for a flash to load without notice. If there is no preloader, most people would assume that there is no need, when in fact there is.) and perhaps a better button example. The circle wasn't something i think anybody would use very often. In a whole, it was a pretty good job of a tutorial, just without the SHAZAAM that would have made it more impressive. Oh and also, when you cover such little area of flash, you should have merged this with several other tutorials of the same size. It was much too short, even though it covered the entire subject.

DP responds:

Ok then

[The Impossible Quiz 2]

AWESOME

Just when you thought the first quiz couldnt get any better....
you are amazing!

[Dance, Bebbe!]

Pretty Ok

Your MAJOR flaw: you dont lose points when you miss letters. i liked the animation though.

Fishslap responds:

You combo breaks - your points are waay larger when you've got a long combo running.