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Hey, Zackie.

ohai, it's Boom.

Monkeyshizznick is a downright retard who needs to open his eyes. Newgrounds isn't the only animation site in the world, fool.

Anyway, that was better than what i was expecting, man. Not that there isn't still room for improvement. Great use of angle, filters, effects and depth. The biggest problem i saw though was resizing. There was far too much of it. Apart from that, great job, I'd love to see this in a battle :)

Zackie responds:

I MAYBE doing a collab with Endo-k and M3D with my gladiator.

Good show, ol' chap

Definitely one of the better ones. Personally, i'm becoming quite a fan of this polygon riffraff.

SuperJeffoMan responds:

thanks dude

That was

Hilarious rofl

hi muffincake :3

muffinman9 responds:

Thanks man ^^

Um, no?

..... Let me guess.
You drew your shitty sprites on paint, made a compilation of pictures in windows movie maker with an fps JUST high enough to be called a 'movie' rather than a slideshow, and then converted the avi to a swf with some shitty converter?

Because if you DID do this in flash, that's really pathetic. Everything was pixelated, so i doubt you made use of flash's vector graphics, and what was the framerate, 2?

This was horrible, and i'm ashamed that newgrounds keeps letting this stuff pass.
There's too much garbage on the portal, the idiots here need to stop 5'ing everything.

iamrunegecko responds:

.... wow, i made this in flash... frame rate is 12... i suck at making graphics... so, go away..

Lots to learn.

A mediocre start.
Work on the following:
Easing (i saw little to none at all)
Physics
Force (again, little to none)
Stiffness
Proper dialogue/displaying of said dialogue (the generic big black unskippable text just screams: "I DIDN'T WORK VERY HARD ON THIS.")
Presentability (again, fancy it up a bit, make it look like it took more effort)

Well, i got to go, right now, but theres a lot more to work on.

blade55555 responds:

Yes I know thank you for the tips I'm not sure what you mean by easing and force maybe pm me but thanks I am going to work on the next one alot harder trust me this one is shit I know.

NICE FUCKING WORK.

That was ENTERTAINING.
Great job, sir. You have truly proved that animation isn't everything, as long as the joke itself is good.
This was great, faved :>

Oh, and newgrounds doesn't work quite like youtube. You can put whatever you want there, all it'll do is piss people off. It is in fact the reason you got a 9 instead of a 10 from me >:C

Flaxington responds:

lol, i realize that now,
i remember before one of the site re-dos, there used to be kitty krew assholes
for what ever you looked up...
so... yeah, i was just trying to find out if it was still like that.
thnx though

Why?

Why are you shitting yourself over one review that was like 5 words long?

Anyway, here it is broken down.

The joke at the end wasn't really funny. It was kinda lame.

What most people do is play with flash for a few weeks before making their first submission. You obviously didn't want to wait and submitted something absolutely experienceless. There was no sign of easing, fluidity, it was just bad.

Length - A very important factor. This was, what, 10 seconds long? Effort is a necessity if you want to get anywhere here.

The combined forces of no length + crappy animation means that many people will mistake this for spam. And honestly, i don't care what you say, this is in the portal about the same time as your other stick video, and you only did it in one hour... yeah, this is spam.

Nobody likes spam, you're gonna have to spend a little more time on your animations. And i don't think you should submit anything until you have a month's practice with the program.

Anyways, that about sums it up. Sorry it had to be like that, but you aren't contributing to this wonderful asset we call newgrounds. Rather, defacing it.

dannydoomno1 responds:

i hav taken all your shitty remarcs and pittiful sorrys in and i think you are right

kai, few things.

First of all, i'd just like to say, that you completely contradicted yourself. If you wanted to spread this message, you would have done better to post it on your userpage, or something. Or at least by putting a little more effort into this flash, at least that way you wouldn't be defeating the purpose.

I find it funny that everybody else who reviewed were saying: "Yeah, man, that's a really good point. People should stop submitting crap."

Okay, well, for one thing, everybody already knows that. It's common knowledge. That's like you walking up to a tree, kicking it, and screaming HEY! DID YOU KNOW YOU WERE A TREE?
Stating the obvious. Pointless.
And secondly, this flash is part of that.

Sorry to sound mean, i don't intend to. Just saying. You are simply adding to the crap and spam.
Anyways, two stars for good intention, another star for the 'effort' you put into this.

straberrykiler6789 responds:

im probably not making any more of these movies any way

I Animate sticks. I'm very active on the flash forum. I wish i could speak japanese, and I like anime/manga. I am also a Actionscripter. I've been told by many on the forums that i am very helpful. I'm friendly, and love to help people out :> FWENDS?

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