zedd56's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[mad madness 08]

What the fuck

Well uh, sorry to bust your bubble, but the people below obviously have little to no expectations.

Whereas i have many.

First off - You can't possibly tell me you didn't see how ridiculously wobbly that was. Watch that, make sure you're moving them into the right place. Second, don't just animate the main part that moves, you made it look unnatural and stiff. Example: if somebody is moving their arm to shoot, yeah you have to animate the arm, but that doesn't mean that nothing else in the scene is moving.

And for god's sake, don't submit things that aren't finished.

[Runescape Wars]

Um, no?

..... Let me guess.
You drew your shitty sprites on paint, made a compilation of pictures in windows movie maker with an fps JUST high enough to be called a 'movie' rather than a slideshow, and then converted the avi to a swf with some shitty converter?

Because if you DID do this in flash, that's really pathetic. Everything was pixelated, so i doubt you made use of flash's vector graphics, and what was the framerate, 2?

This was horrible, and i'm ashamed that newgrounds keeps letting this stuff pass.
There's too much garbage on the portal, the idiots here need to stop 5'ing everything.

iamrunegecko responds:

.... wow, i made this in flash... frame rate is 12... i suck at making graphics... so, go away..

[Chris & Harry]

OMG.

That was the most amazing thing i have ever seen (probably not true, but damn, it's up there for sure.)

This makes me wonder how many awesome flashes there are that never made it to the front page...... so much awesomeness..... never to be seen.....
IT'S NOT FAIR.

Anyways, i just wanna ask, is the music from the matrix? The scene where neo kicks 9312859312859238 agents' asses? Sounded a lot like it.
AWESOME.
Keep it up.

You're anims are like egoraptor on acid. Not saying you're taking his style or anything, just that he did it first, and everybody's going to think of you as 'The Next Egoraptor.'

Good shit, you're on your way to becoming a legend D:

[Dragonball z ep 1]

Lots to learn.

A mediocre start.
Work on the following:
Easing (i saw little to none at all)
Physics
Force (again, little to none)
Stiffness
Proper dialogue/displaying of said dialogue (the generic big black unskippable text just screams: "I DIDN'T WORK VERY HARD ON THIS.")
Presentability (again, fancy it up a bit, make it look like it took more effort)

Well, i got to go, right now, but theres a lot more to work on.

blade55555 responds:

Yes I know thank you for the tips I'm not sure what you mean by easing and force maybe pm me but thanks I am going to work on the next one alot harder trust me this one is shit I know.

[-S M C 3-(shock tribute)]

You have much to learn, but it's a start.

You definitely have a very long way to go, but here are some really brief pointers:

- Too fast. Don't be lazy, put in those in-betweens or the motions will be to fast to see.

- Wobbly Animation. Good to see you're doing fbf, unlike most retards, but make sure you take a little more time and redraw your stick exactly where you want it. To practice this, just draw 10 frames of a stick in the exact same position. Play it back, if he's vibrating, it means you need more practice. I REALLY hope you know about the onion skin tool.

- Crappy dialogue. "There's no way you can win, i just used Grand Viper on you." Please. That sounded so bad, oh my god. It'd be better if you just left it out.

- Timing. Sometimes the 'dramatic' pauses lasted a bit too long. Felt like you were trying to kill the rest of the song. At points it even felt like my flash crashed, haha

- Easing. This is why it wasn't smooth or realistic.

- Physics. Your physics were horrible, keep gravity in mind.

Check out the forums, join the Stick Showdown Collab IV. Not does that give you a chance to make a name for yourself (people loved the other three), but we can help you reach a brand new level of stick animation.

Hope you continue, and have better luck with your animations in the future!
-Cheers, Zedd56

[Drunken Stick]

Hyun, it is you! :P

I usually don't look at the authors name, so when i started watching this, i was like, wait i know i've seen this before... Hyun?
And surely, i was right :D

Keep it up, man, this was some great shit :>

[a tribute to ghostmas]

NICE FUCKING WORK.

That was ENTERTAINING.
Great job, sir. You have truly proved that animation isn't everything, as long as the joke itself is good.
This was great, faved :>

Oh, and newgrounds doesn't work quite like youtube. You can put whatever you want there, all it'll do is piss people off. It is in fact the reason you got a 9 instead of a 10 from me >:C

Flaxington responds:

lol, i realize that now,
i remember before one of the site re-dos, there used to be kitty krew assholes
for what ever you looked up...
so... yeah, i was just trying to find out if it was still like that.
thnx though

[Mario Goes on a Rampage]

It was kinda bad.

Meh.
Nothing new or interesting.
Tipping more to the bad side.
2/5
3/10

What was with the widescreen? Got extremely annoying, you probably would've got a 5/10 out of me if it wasn't for that. Made it look really unprofessional. Same goes for the fact that the first two backgrounds were exactly the same, took me a moment to understand what you did.

[Owned by Brazil]

Huh.

I can't remember where, but i've seen this before.
Shiftlimits?
Ng forums?

Whatever, nice anim.